Tuesday, September 14, 2010
A-Z sample Essays
I decided to read essays A,B and C and select the best one. Personally my favorite of the three is C, Cecilia, because right off the cuff she hooks the reader with her first line. As a reader it makes you want to read more about how she thinks the author gives first impressions of characters. My only criticism to this particular essay is that the introduction is slightly too revealing. She should have saved some of those points and used them later in the essay.
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Chris, I'm a fan of revealing a lot in the intro, rather than hiding it. We should discuss this dilemma in class.
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