Comments on the essay

The main concern for me about my essay and essays in the past are the length of each one. This past essay has been the shortest one i've written in this class, even though I believed my topic had a good basis behind it. I had great ideas for things to elaborate on in the essay but when it came down to the actual formation of the ideas and incorporating those ideas into the essay, it didn't work to well. The other problem could have been that I was focusing on one character, Claudius, and at times it seemed as if it would have been easier to compare or contrast him to another character in the play to help create more length, but I think that would have taken away from the central points of my essay.